5 - 7 - 5
Add Kireji - Cutting word at end of line. Heightened sense of closure.
Attempt to divide the 5 7 5 into two parts. Juxtapose the reader.
(Not always added to English Haiku)
Kigo - add a word that defines a season.
Cold cus-to-mer calls,
Re-quest-ing for-mal-i-ties
De-al as the first.
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